Text Production: a blog comment
I agree with Samantha that we spend too much time on our phones. Many young people stay online all evening because their friends are there, and nobody want to miss anything. In my opinion, schools should to make clear rules. Phones could stay in our bags during lessons, and in buses people could use headphones.- T task achievement
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- O organisation and coherence
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- R structural and lexical range
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- A structural and lexical accuracy
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A clear opinion and two concrete rules. Next time, check that the verb agrees with nobody and everybody.

